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Unit 2 Writing 话题:
今昔对比：描述变化，表达看法
书面表达（2011-11 ）
进入初三后，你在日常生活、学习、兴趣爱好以及性格等方面都有了一些变化。请你选择两个方面谈谈你的变化和你对初三生活的看法。
可供参考的词汇：play sports, study by…, more outgoing, busy 审题：文体____________
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文章修改
In the gread 9, my life has changed a lot.
First, about free time. In the last year, my life is busy. But I also have a lot free time. Now, I am not only busy but also tired, so now I don’t have free time any more. I only have a little time play sports.
Then, all of our subject are difficult. I feel study hard and my grade is very bad.
I hope I can deal with that changes.
修改建议：
Beginninng: My life has changed a lot in the last few years. This year, I have some changes, because next year I will have to face a big test that may change my life. As time goes by, I have changed a lot and I am happy to tell you the changes I have.
Body:
As for study, I used to study by myself. But now I often study by working with friends and they often help me learn English. I think it can help me study English better.
By Cai Cui In the past, I was a shy girl who didn’t like talking with the other people. But now, I am more outgoing and friendly.
By Jingxue Li As for the personality, because of the timidity of the strange environment, I used to be very quiet in the school. But now I have so many friends that I am no longer shy. My outgoing personality makes me more and more popular.
By Haoyu Guo First of all, in the past I usually watched TV in the evening. But now I am interested in playing tennis. I play with my friends every evening. Doing sports as much as possible is not only good for my health but also can help me relax.
By Rui Chong
As for my hobby, I used to be interested in playing games. But now, I prefer studying in my free time instead of playing games. I just find reading books that have great words can give me energy when I am tired. So I always do some reading now, which not only helps me get knowledge but also make my parents happy.
By Zihao Zhao
In the past, I only played sports that I liked and I would rather watch the matches at home than play sports outside. But now, I make my own decisions to spend more time playing sports to improve my skills because I realized the importance of sports. And I become more outgoing because of it. In my opinion, sports become an important part of my life.
By Jianing Cui
Ending: What great changes I have! To be honest, this year is very busy for me, but I know I can have a colorful future. The harder we work, we more progress we will make. Hope our dream can come true.
Opinions
In my opinion, Junior Three is the most important year. It is worth studying hard to study in a good high school. I hope I can have a beautiful future by studying hard this year.
By Ruisheng Li
Although I really miss the old days, I have to study harder and harder. This is one of the most important challenges in my life. I believe that I will succeed.
By Enkang Zhang
What big changes I had. Even though there are a lot of troubles in this year, I still regard them as challenges. I hope my dream can come true in the future.
By Jinjin Han These are the changes I have as I became a student in Grade 9. I am trying to do more things in a limited time. And I am happy to see that I am growing. I think I’d better say thanks to all the changes I have.
By Yuzhen Zhang
These years, I have changed my daily life, study, hobbies and my personalities with the time goes by, but I think I am walking on a way that leads me to successful all the time. What great changes I have!
By Jianing Cui
This year is not only a busy year for us to fight for a great high school we like, but also an important way leading to maturity. I will try my best to study hard to achieve my dream. I am really looking forward to becoming an outstanding person in the future.
By Haoyu Guo
Although life in Grade 9 is a little bit hard for everyone, I believe the things we learned will help us grow and it will be a great memory in our whole life.
In this year, we are going to be busier, but we will learn how to make full use of our time. We are going to have some problems, but we will learn how to deal with them with the help of our teachers. The life in Grade Three is a challenge as well as an experience. So we should try our best to cherish it and enjoy it.
病句修改 I used to be afraid of speak in front of many people. The life in Junior Three is really tired. I used to afraid of thillers. Now I don’t afraid of snakes any more. I study more hard-working. In the past few years, I used to be shy. Now we become more and more busy. I don’t have time playing computer games. These change can help me come true my dream. In the past, I used to quiet and shy.
Sample Writing 1 My life has changed a lot in the past few years. In the past, I used to be shy. But now, I am more outgoing. I think I am happy in the class. In the past, I used to stay at home. But now, I always play sports with my mom. And now I like playing sports. I like my changes. They make me healthier and enjoy my life more. I hope I can be better in the future.
By Re Zhao Sample Writing 2 I have changed a lot since the beginning of Grade Nine, both in my daily life and in my personality. As for my daily life, I am much busier than before. I used to have lots of free time, so I spent much time playing computer games or chatting with my friends after school. However, now I have to go right home and do my homework. I am not allowed to play games any more. As for my personality, I am more confident and more outgoing than before. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of the class because I thought my classmates might laugh at me. Now I have made great progress. Not only do I answer questions actively in class, but also I take part in many activities. Life in Grade Nine is stressful, but I enjoy it because I have gained a lot of experience. I have learnt how to regard problems as challenges and face them bravely, which will prepare me for the future.
Sample Writing 3 Time goes by; I am studying in Grade 3 now. And I have many changes.
First of all, I used to be a little shy in the past. And now, I am more outgoing than before. So I make more and more friends. We can get on well with each other and share experience to help others. It is very useful for me to have this change. Besides, I am not wild any more. I become calm instead. I think being calm is such an exciting change that it helps me with not only study but also life.
Second, my life is very busy now. I have to study as hard as I can. Luckily, I find something useful to help me such as studying by listening to tapes and by watching English movies. I can relax myself at the same time. In my free time, I always read some helpful books. Although my life is so busy, I don’t mind it because being busy is another way to make life colorful.
In short, changes are different. But they are all in a diary that records our growth. We need to enjoy them, don’t we?
By Jia Lu
Sample Writing 4
Everyone has changed a lot since Junior 3. So do I. I find I changed in both life and personality.
First, as for my life, the biggest change is that I become a lot busier than before. In the past, I was too lazy to get up early to study but now I make good use of morning time so that I can do well in my exams. And in the past, I enjoyed playing sports to relax myself but now I run to exercise instead. I don’t think busy life is bad for me because now I have a stage to realize my dream by myself.
Second, my personality has changed too. To be honest, I used to be lazy and childish but now I become more and more mature and self-disciplined. And in order to go to a good high school, I am also dedicated. I think all my personalities now mark that I have grown up.
Above all, although I am a busy Junior 3 student, I still feel proud that I have an opportunity to make my dream come true and I think all my changes are meaningful. It’s worth studying hard this year. What great changes I have.
By Lucy Wang
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